TENPO - Chilean Banking app
Who Tenpo, one of Chile's preeminent online banks, were organizing a contest to bring attention to their newest promotion: A call to action and solution to one of the country's most most glaring financial woes.
whatI was approached by one of the competitors for a script edit and rewrite on their entry. The draft I received was clearly translated from its original Spanish and required a great deal of work to flow beautifully in English.
howTo begin my edit, I needed to break the previous draft down to its message, and then find an overarching story upon which to build dramatic tension in a short span of time. Rebuilding and expanding the script, giving it a more conversational, informative tone, was met with resounding approval and awards. That's also my voice you hear in the video!